Friday, December 25, 2020

The Wicked Girl Comments

Rating: 4.7

She is really a bird of prey
Sitting on a branch counting her day

She has a heart with a gaping hole
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Eillio Imbasciati 26 December 2020

There are many examples and alalogies for wiked people and deeds, but I especially like the explanation & direction of this piece. I think this is great work!

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 December 2020

Humble thanks for giving your valuable time to my poem. Thanks for wonderful comment.

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Kostas Lagos 26 December 2020

Quite breathtaking poem! Thanks!

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 December 2020

Feeling inspired. Thanks very much.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 26 December 2020

A strong, highly emotional poem, most powerfully written by Anil ji. One cannot escape 'karma'. Bad deeds will always recoil and hit back. This must be a very wicked lady, indeed! 5 stars for the poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 December 2020

My heartfelt gratitude for reading and giving beautiful comment. Inspired. Regards.

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David Wood 26 December 2020

A fiery woman indeed, captured by kismet. A good poem thanks.

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 December 2020

My regards. Thanks a ton Sir.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 December 2020

Innocent and honest each creature

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 December 2020

Feeling honored sir

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Varsha M 25 December 2020

These lines are as if fiery arrows on someone who has cheated

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Varsha M 25 December 2020

She knows her death is chasing her whenever she goes She will get the thorns and forever forget about the rose...

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 December 2020

Thanks very much for reading and giving wonderful comments. Gratitude.

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me poet yeps poet 25 December 2020

merry xmas to all PH POETS

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Luis Estable 25 December 2020

The rhyme-scheme is done well and the read that gives this poem is interesting. There is much to feel in the blank about all that this creature has done that guessing from the title and some of the lines must have been a lot of bad deeds.

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 December 2020

Thanks very much for your beautiful comment. Regards.

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