She is really a bird of prey
Sitting on a branch counting her day
She has a heart with a gaping hole
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A strong, highly emotional poem, most powerfully written by Anil ji. One cannot escape 'karma'. Bad deeds will always recoil and hit back. This must be a very wicked lady, indeed! 5 stars for the poem.
My heartfelt gratitude for reading and giving beautiful comment. Inspired. Regards.
She knows her death is chasing her whenever she goes She will get the thorns and forever forget about the rose...
Thanks very much for reading and giving wonderful comments. Gratitude.
The rhyme-scheme is done well and the read that gives this poem is interesting. There is much to feel in the blank about all that this creature has done that guessing from the title and some of the lines must have been a lot of bad deeds.
There are many examples and alalogies for wiked people and deeds, but I especially like the explanation & direction of this piece. I think this is great work!
Humble thanks for giving your valuable time to my poem. Thanks for wonderful comment.