Thursday, April 7, 2016

The Why's Of Life Comments

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Bri Edwards 01 May 2016

i did not mean to send my incomplete comment. here is more. this does not strike me as poetry so much as a sermon. also, i don't know the 'rule' of making the word why's. normally i would just add an s to make most nouns plural [such as 'toys' or 'birds'; why should whys be different? ? ], but i think i would use the apostrophe also, as you did. anyway, WE get some poetic license they say, so we can do it our way! ! i'm not familiar with the use of 'capes' and 'vales' here. no matter. thanks for sharing. BUT, thinking more about the title: why Why's? wouldn't Ways be more accurate? you do not seem to answer questions, but just state 'facts'. i still like it. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 01 May 2016

how, for goodness sakes, does one stay ABOVE?

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