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I long to feel as the eagle does
soaring high and swift among the clouds
and while my dreams alight, I cannot fly because
my arms have nary a feather, my feet are planted to the ground
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This is a wonderful poem. This is an excellent composition. The content is creative and the imagery is amazing. Great use of rhyme and near rhyme...smooth flow. I love all the stanzas, but the 6th stanza is my favorite. You definitely deserve a 10 for this one. Beautifully wroght.
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7/22/2025 2:57:45 AM # 1.0.0
a really lovely poem, inspirational X