Friday, March 17, 2017

The Whole Put-On Comments

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The mad dance of the pretentious
Cardboard cutouts hoped to impress me
With their rhinestone-speckled clothes,
Hopping about to the hypnotic beat
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Rod M.Peters
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Bri Edwards 11 May 2017

i like hopping and hoping in the same stanza. fixed down by two-inch nails, ........didn't get this. we aren't talking crucifiction, or is that crucifixion. ARE WE? but i really don't get the 2-nails part. And run half naked down Life's narrow aisles............watch out for those old ladies shopping for the cat food. [for themselves OR? their cats] favorite lines: Deciding that ridicule was a bargain price For a chance to swat the nagging doubt? well, I LIKE watching young ladies parading through colored mists, rhinestones or not. am i taking something literally which i'm not supposed to? bri :)

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Rod Mendieta 12 May 2017

Suppose, dear friend, that perhaps, just perhaps, reality is not exactly what it seems, that some agency whether human or superhuman (more likely elements of both) has put up a grand show to keep us distracted from finding out inconvenient truths, that we’re all dazzled by this ‘smoke and mirrors’ spectacle and have been (figuratively speaking) ‘nailed to our seats’, that is, conditioned to not be able to get a different angle on things. Of course, if you so much as suggest a thing like this you’re immediately exposed to ridicule, or not? Well, would you not pay the price of ridicule and do your best effort to divest yourself of the false assumptions that are holding you down (i.e., ‘go naked’) to try and pull the curtains and expose the ‘man’ running the show? Incidentally and in reference to one of the best works of fiction produced by your country, I’ve always thought that Toto (the staunch little pooch) was the real star in the old Oz story, exposing that phony wizard for the fraud he was.

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