Sunday, April 15, 2007

The White Rose Comments

Rating: 4.3

The white rose sits on her grassy throne
Her hands are gloved in leaves of green
Her face is as pale as the winter moon
She looks to the sun, lively and keen
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Claude Davis III 16 April 2007

Great write Sophie. I liked the ending with the white rose loving a red rose. Very observant with good imagery too. 10 Claude Davis III

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THE FIRST SHRIKE 15 April 2007

The tears you bring upon my face, the fragrence is that, I know pure grace.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 15 April 2007

The white rose loves a red rose! What a fine imagination! !

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