Monday, November 9, 2015

The White Pigeon Comments

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Driving on the busy road
found people with foul words in their throat

Everywhere there was traffic jams
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Rajat Jain
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Rajnish Manga 09 November 2015

Welcome to this Forum, Rajat. Your poem reminds us of the need to live in unison with nature and to have peace of mind amidst all the hassles of life. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 November 2015

Wonderfully while you drive life in busy road this gives very wonderful experiences and you can hear many words of people even in traffic jams. Pigeon is symbol of peace flies to transfer message there. Getting a smile on palm finding peace bird is very interesting. Nice sharing really....10

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