Sunday, September 30, 2012

The White Piano Comments

Rating: 5.0

A white piano was your mother's gift to you,
Shining, glistening, a symbol of hope and joy, you never knew,
Your life without your source and your father who didn't want to know, of course,
Your mother so delicate and fragile, couldn't last the extra mile,
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Castellenas John 15 April 2019

Wonderful poetry to remind us of a kind woman. A amazing poem shared Hazel.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2018

Blossoming into a curvy blonde lovers conveyed about full vision of gloomy movement. Tragic loss provokes thought. An amazing poem we revisit again.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 October 2017

It is a great tribute to Mariln Monroe, the beauty queen, the gorgeous singer, and the adorable actress who got an premature death which brought a great shock to the peoples of the world. You have inscribed..... The world was full of gloom, for the tragic loss of Marilyn, The white piano is stored away, it still plays a heavenly tune eternally, Your image is everywhere, your song goes on with such iconic steps, Immortality is yours, Norma Jeane lives today, in her own unique way. Beautifully crafted and shared amazingly.10

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Mizzy ........ 21 September 2016

Gorgeous singer and beautiful actress...she achieved much in her short life. This is such a touching dedication born from her life story.... Enjoyed the read and the memories!

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Akhtar Jawad 06 September 2015

Merilyn Munroe ruled the hearts with a broken heart and had to commit suicide. The entire world was shocked. A nice poem on her.....................10

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Rachel Butler 22 August 2015

' Norma Jeane lives today, in her own unique way ' and always will

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Valsa George 22 July 2015

Merilyn Munroe....the dazzling beauty queen who mesmerized the world through her motion pictures had a troubled childhood and an unhappy end. But she continues to live in the hearts of millions as an actor and model. Enjoyed this great tribute to her! The White piano story is something new to me.... Enjoyed the poem! Thanks Hazel!

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Kanav Justa 18 May 2013

this is brilliant stuff, , , loved it

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Barbara Nixon 12 December 2012

Exquisite poem, beautifully written!

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Kevin East 01 November 2012

Sad but beautiful, poignant and original...like marylin.

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 October 2012

Very deep, allusive, descriptive, metaphors, similes, sounds, aura.......the poetry has everything in blended perfection

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Ramesh Rai 08 October 2012

nice Hazel. keep it up. never get discouraged. whatever u r doing, doing with your own heart and it is always nice. the day will not be far when you will reach the top. Grand.

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Madhu Mangal Biswas 02 October 2012

Excellent and enterprising Hazel...Oh you write so well! May be not far away from having tenure with Penguine! Keep coming!

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Karen Sinclair 30 September 2012

Hello Hazel.... this is a lovely tribute to a lady who touches so many people..... she will be adored forever...some like it hot is my favourite film of all time and she is just so stunning in it from start to finish.... im inspired to buy her story now too...really i am.... tyvm karen

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