The White Noise Of Water Comments

a brilliant poem, ticks the mental baggage

I remember being tumbled by a wave and turned under it instead of riding like I intended. Your poem gave me the same kind of pummeling. Breathtaking.

A brilliant write you have here Philip! Capturing and thought provoking! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

Poet indeed! ! Couldn't wait to read the next line, like a dog begging for something sweet. So beautifull! ! ! So so beautifull! ! ! loved it truly, please write some more

This is such a beauitful poem thank you for sharing it Philip such wonderful use of language and so well written truly inspired writing indeed 10 out of 10