Thursday, September 17, 2020

The White Moth Comments

Rating: 4.7

In the shadows
Was it an angel or a bird?
No, it was a tiny, white moth
Flying away from a monster
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Mj Lemon 18 September 2020

How many times have we swatted a colourful moth, only to feel remorse? Perhaps it was an angel? ? Great verse, LeeAnn.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 17 September 2020

Nice poem. Leave the moth alone. After all it will be sindged by the candle.....how do you spell sindged?

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Varsha M 17 September 2020

Was it an angel or a bird? No, it was a tiny, white moth Flying away from a monster ghost Me the big me haunting like a lion great. Just a try. Don't mind please. Just playing with words.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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