Wednesday, May 2, 2012

The White Lily (Novelinee) Comments

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As if constantly caught in a prayer
sprung from the very painful tears of Eve
white petals reach holy into the air
as if in purity it does believe
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Gert Strydom
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Karen Sinclair 02 May 2012

Sorry.. typo... the first line grabbed :)

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Karen Sinclair 02 May 2012

Only a true poet could see mother nature through such expressive eyes... exceptional piece.. the first line banned and remained in my mind whilst completing this little gem...

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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