Tuesday, November 30, 2010

The White Liars! Comments

Rating: 4.6

Just a small brief about the poem before u read!
'This poem portrays people who lie like anything,
who dont hesitate to lie irrespective of the situation,
people whose conscience says 'I dont care as far as
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Jameel Ahmed Ansari
COMMENTS
Inshirah Nalfees 22 May 2020

Good evening, Beautiful and awesome poem. I write poems too inspired by you,mamu. He is my Uncle.

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Sanjeeda Begum 17 January 2019

Very nice poem brother.

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Naima Ansari 16 April 2015

Ita so realistic , sir. An excellent poem that portrays those who have often lied to us in this Manner.

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Bella Stylos 30 January 2012

Great poem and I smiled sheepily away enjoyin the lines!

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Dolapo Eunice 27 October 2011

Seriously its great, i love it

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Nadine Mushcab 05 March 2011

It's kind of a funny poem, it made me laugh. Most people show how good it is to honest and all the good the good things, but you have shown what lying is and in a way how to avoid it..Good job

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Nadine Mushcab 05 March 2011

It's kind of a funny poem, it made me laugh. Most people show how good it is to honest and all the good the good things, but you have shown what lying is and in a way how to avoid it..Good job

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Dannie Urban 02 March 2011

I realy like this poem. i also like the movie alot so haha! good job on it! :)

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Ogbonna Solomon 28 February 2011

wawww! U did a good work here i must say, but u know it's still good to lie in some cases.

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Zubaida Boland 27 February 2011

This poem is simply amazing. I salute your talent. good job, keep it up!

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Lynn Glover 26 February 2011

I'm not very fond of liars and I'm not very fond of your poem, only kidding, i did like the poem, but not liars. Try another subject and I might enjoy it more.

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Masaomi Tezuka 26 February 2011

It is very moving and true i believe i know someone like that. Thank you for telling me to read it.It was really good. :)

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Shelly Burgess 26 February 2011

You were right in requesting me to read this. Unfortunately I believe I lived with this person. Very nice poem.

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Vyktor Ekott 25 February 2011

Jameel, this poem should attract international recommendation. You speak the mind of every childhood and adulthood. The truth is that we deceive ourselves when we feel we're actually deceiving others.

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Yr ~Rune for Death~ 25 February 2011

I hate liars. They are no good and do nothing but hurt themselves by hurting others. I did not love your poem but it was good. Keep writing I'd like to read more.

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Joana hewitt 25 February 2011

Love This poems everybody lie and don't feel right to lie and telling the truth is the only way to save your life so to be honest here love the poems

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Constance K Yost 24 February 2011

I won't lie to you, this poem is well done, but awfully unpleasant to read! ! Constance

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Wendy Thopliss 24 February 2011

I should say this poem is terrible but unlike you i can't lie so i have to say it is great. Nice write. Just hope you don't comment on any of my poems because i won't know if i would believe you. Wendy.x

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