Tuesday, July 7, 2009

The White Hart Comments

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The white hart and his does
Running wild is all he knows,
Has the pleasure freedom gives,
But hunted down where e’re he lives.
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Josephine Dunn
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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 25 July 2009

'What choices hard we have to make, When death causes hearts to break.' That's a powerful way to end it. They're strong words that make you think and wonder. That's one thing that makes a great poem, is a good, unique, strong ending and you've accomplished it ver well. Good peice *Shelby

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