The White Flower! Comments

Flower power at its beat At the midst of such impurity very nice to read

this was beautiful.... :)

I'm really not a fan of poems that don't rhyme... But it seems this one is worth the time. Good show! .. Continue the poetic shimmering glow!

i like it and i also like the inherent implication that another is coming into being even as these petals float away... this impure crazy nasty world is the same where flowers (flowers!) are born and live

At first it starts with the beauy of nature, then turns into deciet- portrays your true emotions- nice write :)

Mehreen, enjoyed your well written piece. Ian

lovely- innocence of flower and infant captured well, withering slowly. happy composing.10a sensitive write, heart felt Mamta

A very well written poem, the white flower depicting innocenece and purity that for some does not last, 10 for this Lynda xx

brilliant poem...probably your best till now... keep writing girl.... cheers

The white flowers among us are, sadly, quite rare.

with each gust of intolerance, until the delicacy is worn out, and just the stalk is left, rough and naked, OMG: This is truly awesome. Mehreen it was an honor to be here Good luck Girl Rehan

This is one of the most special poems I have read. It is worthy of a place among my treasured favorites. You are a special poet to write such a wonderful treasure of the written word. GW62