Monday, August 4, 2008

The Whim And The Whole Comments

Rating: 4.5

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Oh my half-baked poem!
Why do you tell stories-
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Raihan sharif
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Cheung Shun Sang 06 August 2008

i believe to you beside whim you got another one. real strokes are you

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Greenwolfe 1962 04 August 2008

It appears that the writer intends this to be the first chapter in a long story of learning about life. It is a little hard to tell because the clarity is not exactly what you need for the transfer of real meaning. However, I think I understood this one, so I did give it a recommended reading score of 8. GW62

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