Thursday, June 8, 2017

The Wheelbarrow Moves On...... Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wheelbarrow greets me
during my morning walk
as the sweeper pulls on with both his hands
people throw garbages
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Kishore Kumar Das
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Am I not pulling the invisible wheelbarrow.? Amazing write.10

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Kishore Kumar Das 12 June 2017

Thank you for your nice appraisal....

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Susan Williams 10 June 2017

Oh! I like this very much! ! ! The metaphor of the wheelbarrow being used to pick up people's garbage - - absolutely top-notch use of the wheelbarrow in the following: Am I not pulling the invisible wheelbarrow? when people throw sorrows and anger pride and prejudice jealousy and hatred... but the wheelbarrow moves on... - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Showers of 10's on this poem

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Kishore Kumar Das 11 June 2017

Thank you Susan madam for your breath-taking like of my poem filling my mind with pleasure and motivation....I look forward to your visit to my poems...

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Rini Shibu 08 June 2017

Time waits for none and life has to go on. Very true+++10

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Kishore Kumar Das 09 June 2017

Thank you Rini for appreciating the central idea......

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Cuttack, Odisha
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