Monday, September 7, 2009

The Wheel Comments

Rating: 2.0

It spins all day long
pumping the oil from beneath the surface
It never complains nor does it appreciate the task
It has no choice but to keep on spinning
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Charles Farmkidzzz Mthembu
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Almedia Knight-Oliver 09 September 2009

An interesteing and fresh perception of 'the Wheel' both annimated and non annimated. good write...keep it up poet!

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Gayle Anne Goff 07 September 2009

CHARLES I HAVE NEVER READ YOUR POETRY BEFORE YOUR GOOD HOPE YOU'LL EJOY YOUR TIME ON POEM HUNTER. LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE

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Charles Farmkidzzz Mthembu

Charles Farmkidzzz Mthembu

Durban South Africa
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