Wednesday, July 8, 2009

The 'What Is Romance' Sonnet Comments

Rating: 4.8

Not Hallmark cards with someone else's lines
But a poem in your own words and rhymes
Not teddies wrapped in the tissues of a lie
But things that show you care and try
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Red Talgarth
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You truely know what love is a ten from me. If you get a chance please read my poem SPEAK OF LOVE

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Black Mendilouche 08 July 2009

I can't give it 10/10 because the lines don't all scan as they should, but I forgive it all for the final two lines my dear. How could a girl not fall in love with that?

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