Monday, May 18, 2009

The Wetting Comments

Rating: ★4.3

Hair line cracks on the east wall
open slowly to drown us all

water starts bleeding out
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Eric Elliott
people water fish scream
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Autumn Jones 17 August 2009

This is my favorite so far. Great rhyming and great description of the scene. I give it a 10.

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Michael Moorcroft 16 August 2009

Thought provoking and good rhymes.10

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<i>*Kay: It gets more complicated* 18 May 2009

hmmm.... interesting... i like the flow.... it's nice.. thanks for sharing.

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