Wednesday, August 1, 2012

The Well Worn Ring … 0108-2k12 Comments

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(Plight of an abandoned elderly social worker)

Drag a well worn ring apart,
and ring the middle finger,
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saadat tahir
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Alexandria Angel 29 August 2012

i love the poen it has alot of neaning and it made me start to cry...

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Karen Sinclair 27 August 2012

Saadat this is just so thought provoking and as beautiful as a cut from a rose thorn.... breathtaking just so sad and lovely.... a wow read indeed

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Elena Sandu 24 August 2012

Oh this poem is so sad that tears blurred my eyes. Thank you for share,10.

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Valerie Dohren 09 August 2012

Brilliantly written, very imaginative and descriptive.

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Simon Odhiambo 09 August 2012

Mind jogging and serious poem. very nicely done. keep it going.

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Captain Cur 08 August 2012

Very provoking. You used a minimum of words but addressed a insurmountable mountain of loneliness, lost youth and rejection. Powerful and well written.

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