The Welcomed Intruder Comments
She flew in from the Countryside,
She flew in through my front door,
She whizzed around my kitchen,
She skimmed across my floor.
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Your poem is such a welcome and uplifting addition to my day... Thank you Ernestine.
Completely delightful, Ernestine! You make the everyday special. Love it! Love and prayers, Esther
A mysterious and worrying opening leading to a light and jolly denouement. Sweet little number, Ernestine.
This is a very sweet and earthy poem, connected to life, connected to the unexpected gifts each moment can bring if we only pay attention. Hugh
I love the cadence of the first stanaza and its syntax. I thought at first it was some rival invading your little private kingdom despite the word 'flew' when to my surprise the visitor was a ladybird. This made the visitor more than welcome as the poem progressed. A wonderful technique.
Nature seems to have made us contented neighbours on this page, Ernestine!
Another wellcomed guest, let in through your door of kindness and great words.Love Duncan
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7/26/2025 1:37:34 AM # 1.0.0
Spring is in the air, and a ladybug went in my ear. I was a bit surprised to say the least... chuck