Tuesday, December 9, 2008

The 'Weird' Child Comments

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I was the 'weird' child.
You know...
The odd one out!
The one with chores and responsibilities.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Bri Edwards 10 November 2016

The one all the kids would laughed at, ......laugh at, right? hee-hee favorite lines so far: If I looked as if I wanted to say something about it. My father 'tried' to be strict. But my mother handled the 'raising' business....................this actually made me laugh a little bit. sorry? and And today I see many of them, That bring me to tears. They don't know how to do anything... But complain! ......................................... i hear ya, though i have not experienced the same life as portrayed by the poem. i wonder if this was/is YOUR life. 'Sssshhh. Shut up! ' ............i also wonder who is saying that. sister or mama or 'you'? i 'love' this poem. it is short on rhyming, but LONG on meaning and feeling and drama! ! ! to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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