Tuesday, January 3, 2012

The Weight Comments

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Baring the weight of burden, carried deep in my soul.
Searching for passage to wisdom, not once hearing the bell toll.
Peering through eyes filled with visions, of mistakes made long ago.
Caught by a blistering whirlwind, scorching me from within.
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Sara Fielder 04 January 2012

Not to be cliche, but I could actually feel your pain. Fantastic read.

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Rigzin Namgyal 03 January 2012

great poem sir it was lovely

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Silentpoet Grl 03 January 2012

Love this poem - vivid imagery- 'Caught by a blistering whirlwind, scorching me from within. Providing my ashy cloak, comprised of cinders and smoke.' - Truly amazing lines right there!

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