Monday, June 1, 2009

The Weeping Willow Comments

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My dreams fell apart,
One by one,
In front of me
As he laid there,
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Manta Rogers
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Kyrsten Gaddis 03 June 2009

I love it... just check a couple of gramatical errors and it would be perfect...acctually you could make this into a story...nevertheless... it's amazing -Kyrsten

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Amy Hang 01 June 2009

I really liked this one... Its interesting n with fantasy with it thats terrific! ! ! ^_^

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