Tuesday, October 18, 2011

The Weeping Day Comments

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The weeping day
Smoky black wind blow with grief
Cover the sky, the dark everywhere, we can't see
All what we see are faked adornment and mirage
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hosny Soliman
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Rekha Mandagere 21 November 2011

Friend, your poem really made me to weep! What a depth weeping has, it is no where less than the depth of ocean. Nice sentiments. Great write :)

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Unwritten Soul 19 October 2011

It's like a rainy day i have at this moment..tearful from sky and you made the day sound so beautiful..and the emotion you throw just another beautiful...a combination of beautifully broken piece..i simply like it very much...shed your tears day, let sun smile again on you :) _Unwritten Soul

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