The Wedge (Revised) Comments

The wedge falls silent in cold regress Wow Sir... Another brilliant work of art... Thanks for sharing...

nice poem, well write dear

The symbolism is clear. Human mind is like that. The world is like that. We can't blame the world for its wayward ways. If we want to save ourselves, the only way is to retune our outlook towards life. Everything is a question of attitude. A good composition

Amazing! ~that's all i have to say. Keep writing please... I enjoy all your poems. Sincerely, Jake

nice flow and tempo! bravo Pablo! gracias por compartir este pedazo! guardar la escritura y Dios para bendecirte!

Who can answer the questions raised at the end of the poem? A well composed poem.

Free flowing words make this poem fine! Nice to read!

Super work dear Pablo an honest 10++

distance makes the heart grow fonder this is something that we must ponder. true love will always prevail for this is something that will not fail. gr8t write

Wedges came to my mind for carpentry purposes and spliting things in life.

Pablo, this is a highly original theme accompanied by thought-provoking pen. I found myself thinking of a coffin - not sure if this was your message but that what appeared in my mind. Excellent piece and another 10 Mark

very nice and thought provoking poem. thanks for sharing.well composed.

So much exposed in this penning about the dynamics of a dysfunctional, maybe even symptoms of a 'normal' relationship....you detailed the caustic destruction of driving wedges in between two people with a continous disintegration and divisioon with only memories leaving us to wonder....'what happened'

Dear Pablo, It is a good poem. Words are well-knit, composite and pregnant with further explanation.Truly, 'Tapered edges opposed in form' 'whose face to stain a job become whose shame to bear the damage done'--leaves much for thinking I liked the poem in particular the construction.Thanks for sharing -Rajkumar

beautifully written... i love your writing

A failed by-product of the human condition! Passionate...yet painful...angst laden write. Excellent composition.

it wedges deep withing surely.............well penned

brilliantly written....with a great concept the wittiness is very visible... wholesome....matured piece thoughts' provoking 10++

brilliant theme with an intriguing title...poignant in tone, definitely heart wrenching

wow, i am always in awe of your works, Pablo.this is really awesome, and your talent shows. Hugs, Meggie