The Wedding Call
the summer sun,
realignes a call with the coming of age,
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s Adam and Eve's knownledge of the red apple and the evil temptations. a transition of awareness, from a mothers wombare predicted to be the sons and the daughters. A young man catching a young girl's eyes anda hand in marriage... fine poem full of desire and its worthy expressions. dear poet. tony
thank you for these encouraging words, as poets we aspire for the best lines for our poems. l am sure you know the sentinments being yourself a great poet at your bests of times
Good effort. Try to read more poem to improve your style.++10