Wednesday, July 18, 2018

The Wedding Call Comments

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The Wedding Call

the summer sun,
realignes a call with the coming of age,
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Robert Murray Smith 19 July 2018

Good effort. Try to read more poem to improve your style.++10

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 July 2018

s Adam and Eve's knownledge of the red apple and the evil temptations. a transition of awareness, from a mothers wombare predicted to be the sons and the daughters. A young man catching a young girl's eyes anda hand in marriage... fine poem full of desire and its worthy expressions. dear poet. tony

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Benjamin Uy 18 July 2018

thank you for these encouraging words, as poets we aspire for the best lines for our poems. l am sure you know the sentinments being yourself a great poet at your bests of times

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Gajanan Mishra 18 July 2018

in the summer garden, good write

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