Thursday, November 5, 2015

The Wedded Couple Comments

Rating: 4.3

It may have began as an ordinary outing
But ended an extra ordinary pilgrimage
When the two hearts drew close to each other
And the two become one-in love
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victor onyango
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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 November 2015

Confluence of two hearts fills the lives of both with joy and the couple lives in bliss, there after. Nice verse with nice rhyme and tremendous positive signals. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Victor Onyango 05 November 2015

am humbed...pleasure

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Gajanan Mishra 05 November 2015

really love is the bridge of two person having one soul..

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Victor Onyango 05 November 2015

thanks a lot fellow poet for reading through...be blessed

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