The Web Of Time Comments

This would make a beautiful song. A classy poem of endearing love. Brief and splendid

Lovely thoughts beautifully woven in symbols of Nature

very touchy and very romantic with sense of season |

The romance tinged with regret gives this poem the atmosphere of a scene from a classic film. This is such a feminine poem - thank you for sharing it.

You hear your name whispered by someone dear in the rustle of leaves and the rush of wind! Not to let him flee away, you wrap your hands around! What romantic fancy! ! Enjoyed!

Beautifully said....and understandably felt....in the web of time.....Another great one, Heather.

Beautiful romantic poem. One can reach the dear ones....beautifully presented.

I can feel your emotion when your words curling my breath..nice one Heather_Soul

if I could take tomorrow trade it for today Repeated many times one can reach the past and reach the dear ones whom we miss. Beautifully rendered.

if I could take tomorrow trade it for today Repeated many times one can reach the past and reach the dear ones whom we miss. Beautifully rendered.

I really like it, but the line skips interrupt the flow of the poem. Otherwise it's awesome!

wow, it is really wonderful, i like especially '' if i could take tomorrow / trade it for today '' love the poem..10+++