The Web Of Lost Comments

You used the word lost in the title of your poem. Since there was no real rhyme or rhythm to the poem, the use of the word lost becomes more important. This is because you want the meaning of your poem to echo in the readers mind. I counted only four uses of the word in the body of the poem. Further, there was no emphasis focused at the begimnning and end. To the extent it was used. I was used inconsistently. These are the structural problems which hindered this poem. It is a poem of worth, however, and I expect you will make more of this poem in the future. GW62

Good job of portraying a feeling of the moment. You are yet young, and no doubt you will find yourself and having done so will be found by others as well.