She unceasingly weaves
Her hopes and dreams
From fibers and threads
In beautiful hues and lines
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Ever so moving and so powerfully written! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ..................................+++++
The last line is haunting, the weaver is trapped in a perpetual habit, in which there is little room to escape, if it stops weaving, then what is the function, the weavers meaning is their work, their profession is their substance.
A thread as strong as steel - wonderful line, could describe every hard working women in this world, whose work goes persistently painstaking at the expense of being appreciated. A weaver spends so much time crafting objects of value that they invest not only their lives but their very souls into their work, the fiber of their being is the fiber that holds the tapestry together.
It produces silk from itself A thread as strong as steel As it ornately weaves its web It secured a safety line Of its own And traps and wraps Its prey to survive......nice poetic expression. To survive is great matter. It is a beautiful poem with its nice essence. Thanks for sharing.
I love the beauty of this poem, ate Rose.....................10+++++++++++++++++
As the weavers Draw their strings For another day Each of them Has her own preference On how to survive........... so touching and impressive. Nice theme. A beautiful poem nicely executed.
As the weavers Draw their strings For another day Each of them Has her own preference On how to survive.............excellent expression Rose! As a great fan of your poems, I derive great pleasure to read each of your poems many times! God bless you!
As she weaves like the wind The threads and fibers...unceasingly weaving.. in fibers, threads, hues, forms earning daily bread....... hard work that earns........ that is life....... thank u dear poetess. you have in a very fine way described life.. thank u tony
An outstanding poem with the skill of weaving has been posted here by you startlingly. There is much link on life and weaving. Thanks for sharing.10
A poem great by all means, I want to rate this poem but there is some fault, I cannot rate any poem by anyone.
I experienced to weave its so hard but its so challenging I love reading your poem keep it up
I experienced to weave its so hard but its si challenging. I love reading your poem keep it up.
You have brilliantly portrayed the lives of weavers in this amazing piece of work! Touching expression: She unceasingly weaves/Her hopes and dreams/From fibers and threads/In beautiful hues and lines....Thanks for sharing Rose....10
What a great tapestry maker Mother Nature must be! She arranges for fitting strands to be available when the little weavers do their work!
Her own preference! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Your poem portrays vividly the sad plight of the village based weavers' life all over the world. Words over lines- A well woven poem Rose Marie 10+