He weaves hate and pain
Creating a web of darkness
That traps him to death.
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I don't know who is that 'he' of your poem but I appreciate your sincere observation! Truthfully put.
Hatred and war will never bring us peace! ! ! ! Only Destruction! ! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
the weaver of hatred the weaver of pain the schemer of difficulty never feels peace inside though outside is gorgeous, never sleeps dreamy at night though outside full of flowery bed never lives friendly at day though outside have many accomplice transient all are transient!
He who weaves hate and pain is buying his own death. Insightful and excellent haiku
Death comes in stages, first to die is the conscience of a man when he starts hating someone. a nice short poem.
An explicit brief work on weaver of hate and pain! Crisply expressed.............10/10
Hate, pain, darkness, weaving. death. so many ideas in such a short poem. dear poetess. to ny
Hate gradually kills oneself. The one who hates is like a murderer just like what Cain did to his brother Abel. Well composed poem....10++❤️❤️❤️
Some people fall in the pit of their own make! No one can save them....! Some weave from the yarn of love and compassion a beautiful tapestry while some others poison the surroundings with animosity, hatred and selfishness....! Hatred leads to pain.... no doubt. The world is enshrouded in darkness.... but some good souls try hard to dispel the gloom with the light of virtue! The effect of hatred is beautifully encapsulated.
Wow! Superbly written and presented as always by a world-class poetess at the peak of her poetry powers, that will never fade or diminish. A world-class poetess by the good name of Rose Marie Juan Austin. 10++ and thank you Rose Marie. Take care and stay blessed.
He weaves hate and pain Creating a web of darkness That traps him to death.
Brilliant piece....as always....thank u...