Thursday, July 23, 2020

The Weaver Of Hate And Pain Comments

Rating: 4.8

He weaves hate and pain
Creating a web of darkness
That traps him to death.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Anjandev Roy 06 November 2022

Brilliant piece....as always....thank u...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 November 2022

I don't know who is that 'he' of your poem but I appreciate your sincere observation! Truthfully put.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 August 2020

Hatred and war will never bring us peace! ! ! ! Only Destruction! ! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 August 2020

Like a spider caught in its own web, true indeed.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 July 2020

the weaver of hatred the weaver of pain the schemer of difficulty never feels peace inside though outside is gorgeous, never sleeps dreamy at night though outside full of flowery bed never lives friendly at day though outside have many accomplice transient all are transient!

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He who weaves hate and pain is buying his own death. Insightful and excellent haiku

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Anjandev Roy 27 July 2020

Wonderful short work.......thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 July 2020

That is true. All the power is with him. Nice poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 25 July 2020

Death comes in stages, first to die is the conscience of a man when he starts hating someone. a nice short poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 July 2020

An explicit brief work on weaver of hate and pain! Crisply expressed.............10/10

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 July 2020

Hate, pain, darkness, weaving. death. so many ideas in such a short poem. dear poetess. to ny

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 July 2020

Hate gradually kills oneself. The one who hates is like a murderer just like what Cain did to his brother Abel. Well composed poem....10++❤️❤️❤️

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Valsa George 24 July 2020

Some people fall in the pit of their own make! No one can save them....! Some weave from the yarn of love and compassion a beautiful tapestry while some others poison the surroundings with animosity, hatred and selfishness....! Hatred leads to pain.... no doubt. The world is enshrouded in darkness.... but some good souls try hard to dispel the gloom with the light of virtue! The effect of hatred is beautifully encapsulated.

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Shaun Cronick 23 July 2020

Wow! Superbly written and presented as always by a world-class poetess at the peak of her poetry powers, that will never fade or diminish. A world-class poetess by the good name of Rose Marie Juan Austin. 10++ and thank you Rose Marie. Take care and stay blessed.

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Kostas Lagos 23 July 2020

Wonderful.Dark, sophisticated.

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Prabir Gayen 23 July 2020

He weaves hate and pain Creating a web of darkness That traps him to death.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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