Wednesday, June 15, 2011

The Weakness In Me. Comments

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The weakness in me!
I woke up today, i did'nt like it the moment my eyes opend
and felt i was tired again just after rest
it had'nt been the 1st tym. It's the weakness in me,
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Paul Ekow O.Nkensen
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Arfa Iris 16 June 2011

good poem............. u have shown the darkness of weakness n also lighted a ray of hope to over come..

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Young Church Poetry 15 June 2011

Great poem, we have to fight weakness we have until the end of time. I invite you to read my poem titled The Rebirth.

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