Sunday, February 27, 2005

The Weakest Link Comments

Rating: 4.0

This life as you know it, clinging onto my shoulders,
A burden so heavy, I have to carry,
Little pebbles have grown into boulders,
I miss the times I could depend on daddy
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Helgard du Preez
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Camacy Melville 27 February 2005

I was kinda confused in the beginning but I like the ending of the poem it made me smile.

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