Thursday, January 2, 2014

The Weak Heart Had Wept For Many Days.. Comments

Rating: 0.0

Those days were as cloudy as the dark nights,
When you had been crying as an abandoned child,
Blaming everything and everyone you encountered,
Cursing and insulting at every step you took upstairs,
...
Read full text

Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
COMMENTS
Kevin Patrick 03 January 2014

Phenomenal write, layered with so much insight into the mind of the subject, to me it sounds like a retelling of the Buddhist story only this time casting a different light from the one originally constructed. The world is a wonderful place, the people in it have problems but if we live our lives in the pursuit of what is good, we should be able to live. I hope your friend is well How high we fly using our wingless fragile thought beautiful sentiment

0 0 Reply
Charles Jagongo Ogola 02 January 2014

Excellent write. The choice of words makes this poem great!

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success