With your unknown
to me
Odd magic
You came
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How about going out Together as buddies For a night of music & dance? . very good poem.. read her biography. thanku. tony
To understand this poem I needed to know more about this poetess. So glad to read her biography and this great poem.
what a lovely poem! there is love-music running, like water, through it. i am taken by how she begins with the start of a relationship with this plumber, and ends up where she does; how relationship, and love, and music, and water blend in a compassionate, a giving, life. -glen
Yet are soothed By your cool & liquid Music, which You pour over them So freely, ..very fine poem and very much original in your way of presentation and thoughts.. tony
A poem that traverses life and loving. One man one woman. Nicely crafted. It could, however, do without the ampersands.
I did not see Life was About to change, as it does, When odd magic appears: There was No music Yet. very fine poem. Tony