Sunday, December 6, 2020

The Ways Of Stars Comments

Rating: 5.0

See those stars twinkling so high in the skies?
Some are sad stars trying to avert their eyes,
They've observed lovers who have parted ways -
To keep from crying they must turn their gaze
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 29 October 2024

Lora, Beautiful. I still miss you on PH, but your poems survive and if I'm truly 'down' your poems could change [ to contentment ] my fitful gloom. Luckily gloom evades me (usually) . bri : )

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Bri Edwards 19 January 2024

I'll just leave another comment here to help lead other members et al to discover (or rediscover) your treasure trove of poems. Best Wishes to you and yours. : ) bri

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2022

Each star is assigned a specific task... well said. A wonderful poem.

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Bri Edwards 25 November 2022

Laura has a GREAT collection of poems IF readers will agree with my opinion. : )

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Bri Edwards 25 November 2022

I vote 5 stars for your stars. I'm missing you, Lora, and hoping you are well, ....OR have died peacefully and gone 'ad astra' aka 'to the stars', where all great poets and lovers can gaze down. bri ;)

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Bipasha Dutt 13 August 2021

But how lucky is the star that hovers And twinkles in the bright eyes of lovers! Their satisfying task never grows old. (With stars in our eyes, love never grows cold) ' Wonderful lines. This poem deserves more than 5 stars

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Bri Edwards 16 December 2020

p.s. wow! This time you've gotten comments galore; the others, plus mine, add up to four. :) good show!

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Bri Edwards 16 December 2020

" Stars must grant favors when they're wished upon, " Why is it that EVERY time i wish to wish upon a star, none are to be seen? ! " were lax, or just dimwitted" Either way, they failed, so they fell. This is another beaut, to which i now GIVE tribute: to MyPoemList bri :)

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Jaishree Nair 07 December 2020

Nice write.thanks

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Deluke Muwanigwa 06 December 2020

And the couplets make me fall in love with poems. I am seeing stars

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Deluke Muwanigwa 06 December 2020

Beautiful poem. This one can be used even in school. Its got colours of racism, regionalism, religion or explicity. Its just a star poem worth 5 stars or more. You are a star. Well done.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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