Friday, July 19, 2013

The Ways Of Life Comments

Rating: 3.3

Life piece of punk is clever!
life bad, sort well good
mean as may seem, nice
life humorous monks and despair
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Ndimele Glory AncientSword
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Jazib Kamalvi 01 May 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Ndimele. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Soulful Heart 14 September 2014

sort of see-saw...back n forth words yet giving out a message to stand fast no mattr what....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 February 2014

mean well unto those stand fast.. nice words...10 life cruel but delivers well.... mehta

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Sekharan Pookkat 01 August 2013

Life is beautiful if you act

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Marcus Mckinley 22 July 2013

cryptic yet understandable. there are a lot of good lines in this poem. although not straight forward for the proper english writers but, then again life is not straight forward is it! nicely done

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Poet's Fan 22 July 2013

the ways of life is best portrayed in the last stanza of the poem, 'Dishonest honest heart ', , i lov this line, thanx

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Chandana Khan 21 July 2013

nice work but needs editing in grammar p'haps.d masters ll tell. 7 marks

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