Life piece of punk is clever!
life bad, sort well good
mean as may seem, nice
life humorous monks and despair
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sort of see-saw...back n forth words yet giving out a message to stand fast no mattr what....
mean well unto those stand fast.. nice words...10 life cruel but delivers well.... mehta
cryptic yet understandable. there are a lot of good lines in this poem. although not straight forward for the proper english writers but, then again life is not straight forward is it! nicely done
the ways of life is best portrayed in the last stanza of the poem, 'Dishonest honest heart ', , i lov this line, thanx
nice work but needs editing in grammar p'haps.d masters ll tell. 7 marks
A good start with a nice poem, Ndimele. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.