Saturday, January 10, 2009

The Way You Make Me Feel Comments

Rating: 4.8

The way you make me feel
Its not hard to explain
I feel like one of those girls in the movies
Who gets kissed in the rain
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Brianna Trombley
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Lovely flowing imagery and nice rhyme. I feel like rejoicing after reading this. Your words paint pictures of happiness. Top marks Karin Anderson

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, , , , , , 21 January 2009

oh i know the feeling love it!

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Riquetta Elliott 21 January 2009

I use to have that feeling with ex. Good job girl :)

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Greenwolfe 1962 20 January 2009

You got some real good rhymes in this. I love this style. You presented the poem well. The readers will love it. GW62

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Kimber Harrison 11 January 2009

It literally put a smile on my face. It was perfect and relatable and perfect. I loved it!

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Brianna Trombley

Brianna Trombley

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