The way you make me feel
Its not hard to explain
I feel like one of those girls in the movies
Who gets kissed in the rain
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You got some real good rhymes in this. I love this style. You presented the poem well. The readers will love it. GW62
It literally put a smile on my face. It was perfect and relatable and perfect. I loved it!
Lovely flowing imagery and nice rhyme. I feel like rejoicing after reading this. Your words paint pictures of happiness. Top marks Karin Anderson