The Way You Made Me Feel Comments

I am the wrong person to ask for comment on this work.

Once again, your ability to express yourself and your emotions so well carried this intimately personal poem, Breeze. Your first three lines were an excellent introduction for the rest of the poem. The only mistake I found was in the second three lines, where in the 2nd of which you should have said blew instead of blow-just a minor grammactical mistake. The rest of your beautiful poem was flawless and very well written. The talent I noted in your other poem that I read was very evident in this one. Carl.

its hard for me to believe that a LEO would allow herself to be taken like that knowing what its like to have once been in love with a LEO myself I'll say...it could be love if you let it.....10/10

fantastic poem i wish the best for you :) nice work x

i'm jealous thats exactly what i'm looking for right now in my life congratulations

Love at its best. Great poem.

A very romantic poem, very realistic, and that tingling is a high point.