Saturday, May 17, 2008

The Way We Were Comments

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we've met in a very unusual way
u said something about my smile that day
i thought to myself 'what kind of game are u trying to play? '
but then u caught my undivided attention anyway.
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Sathyanarayana M V S 29 October 2008

Good rhymes to suit the feeling and emotions. Wonderful play of words.

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Chitra - 26 July 2008

wonderful composition, great language there

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David Desantis 20 June 2008

looks like someone's found a great deal of love...congrats great poem

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Shane Clift 09 June 2008

Beautiful, very nice. Thank you.

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