Thursday, June 4, 2009

The Way We Use To Be Comments

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I love to live and live to love
but how can I love if your far from.......
the way we use to live and breath
Why must we forget these truths these dreams
...
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Amy Ormonde
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Afzal Shauq 18 June 2009

its also a great poem and romantic way done for him and you expressed well... it seems to me is omitted from the core of your heart for him, you are in love with... respect your love for him..and this last stanza is sweet one.. So must we wait or can't you see the stories done this is the end of you and me

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Kyle Jones 17 June 2009

Reminiscence and heartache are the two key points that will always be a constant in dark love poems. this holds true for this piece which doesn't dissapoint in the sense of credibility and originality

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very nice love poem, true love can never be cut through...

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Alex Andreev 17 June 2009

it's a great story about love. i like it So must we wait or can't you see the stories done this is the end of you and me. - this is so sensual...

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