The Way To Eden Comments

‘…and had none to guide // but my dying soul…’ NICE LINES Ten++ dr.sakti

The Way To Eden is my preference.

it's a philosophical piece with great twist actually comforting to see young poets such as yourself addressing the much needed theme of our time-service to others! Good write

Great poem! I would definitely use this poem! Keep up the good work!

Has something to think about

good lesson in this one i would choose this poem

very nicely done i like this one...... +++10 in your vote

Life is a little surprise, and end of life is huge one....this poem is greatly composed and with clear massage.....

This is an excellent poem.....a meaningful thoughts and indicative to the theme... good write.....

I mos def like this piece better than she. It's a very well put and connected story. verse to verse it flows wonderful. I would go with this one for your class.

nice write and message bundeled together cheers

Yep.. Totally agree with you.. Life is great but death is also another great adventure... ^-^

very good poem i like the way it flowes and the msg that is given

I agree. The last stanza sells it. Nice, Blue Eyes

I liked it so much., very nice poem.keep writting dear friend poet. Best wishes

this is such a beautifull poem. I hope u keep writing.

very good poem; dreams are beautifull, waiting for a love for example; Thank you of your writing poem

Wonderful poem again. Another one I enjoyed reading -V

Glory to you, our laureate.your poem has enchanted me with its touchy and magnificent words which have been written in a meaningful way. I 'll take your advice up.

thanks for nice advice! my bratya!