Monday, January 13, 2003

The Way Things Work Comments

Rating: 2.9

is by admitting
or opening away.
This is the simplest form
of current: Blue
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Jorie Graham
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Mahtab Bangalee 04 July 2018

finest line- The way things work is by solution, .... The way things work is that eventually something catches. really great mind great thought

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Son Goku 29 April 2018

Piece of ***** shit

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 29 August 2016

I believe in you- your head is the horizon to my hand. I believe forever in the hooks. The way things work is that eventually something catches. Beautiful work. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.10 for it.

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Marieta Maglas 08 August 2016

Wheel, kinetic flow, rising and falling water, - wonderful 'flow' of this poem- indeed water is the essence of life.

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Leloudia Migdali 06 August 2016

A very nice poem full of truth given in an easy, quiet flow like water. I suppose the title is the first line of the poem?

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Sita Madu-Wynn 03 August 2016

lovely poem, good flow of words.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 July 2016

The way things work! Thanks for sharing.

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 July 2016

Beautiful flow of words caught my attention. The way things work is that eventually something catches. Loved reading it.

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Akshaya Kumar Das 06 July 2016

It is a wonderful poem😂

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2016

The way things work is that eventually something catches. Really very wonderful poem is shared in this forum. Wisely drafted.10

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Idris Elasha 01 July 2016

It caught my eye.It caught fire.

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Khairul Ahsan 24 June 2016

Loved the concluding lines: 'The way things work is that eventually something catches.'

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 June 2016

The way things work is by solution, resistance lessened or increased and taken advantage of. The way things work is that we finally believe they are there, Beautiful lines of the poem. Enjoyed reading.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 June 2016

Fantastic flight of imagery has made this poem very interesting. Thanks for sharing and congrats.

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M Asim Nehal 01 June 2016

Excellent poem, Thanks for sharing.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 June 2016

The way things work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kim Barney 01 June 2016

I think there must be a line or two missing at he beginning of this poem. is by admitting or opening away. Does not make sense to me, but the rest of the poem is certainly coherent, and certainly deserves more than the 4.2 rating given by the 16 voters so far.

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Khairul Ahsan 24 June 2016

I subscribe to your thought, Kim. I too thought so, while reading the poem.

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