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I believe in you- your head is the horizon to my hand. I believe forever in the hooks. The way things work is that eventually something catches. Beautiful work. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.10 for it.
Wheel, kinetic flow, rising and falling water, - wonderful 'flow' of this poem- indeed water is the essence of life.
A very nice poem full of truth given in an easy, quiet flow like water. I suppose the title is the first line of the poem?
Beautiful flow of words caught my attention. The way things work is that eventually something catches. Loved reading it.
The way things work is that eventually something catches. Really very wonderful poem is shared in this forum. Wisely drafted.10
Loved the concluding lines: 'The way things work is that eventually something catches.'
The way things work is by solution, resistance lessened or increased and taken advantage of. The way things work is that we finally believe they are there, Beautiful lines of the poem. Enjoyed reading.
Fantastic flight of imagery has made this poem very interesting. Thanks for sharing and congrats.
I think there must be a line or two missing at he beginning of this poem. is by admitting or opening away. Does not make sense to me, but the rest of the poem is certainly coherent, and certainly deserves more than the 4.2 rating given by the 16 voters so far.
I subscribe to your thought, Kim. I too thought so, while reading the poem.
finest line- The way things work is by solution, .... The way things work is that eventually something catches. really great mind great thought