Saturday, May 13, 2017

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When things are hard
When you are totally confused
All your relatives agree to diverge from you
When all that you eat is tasteless
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Ishmael Mabhiza
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Jazib Kamalvi 03 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Ishmael. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 May 2017

Cling not to the past Look forward and mind your own business Pray hard and work hard Be positive about anything Fear no person but respect every person.... After writing about all the negative experiences you end with a powerful determination to achieve inspite of the odds you face........ very very good poem. love it. tony

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