Sunday, November 13, 2005

The Way It Is Comments

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I wonder if he has
the same crooked little finger I have.
Does he stare at it in the same
irritated way I do
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Amanda Lukas
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Seán O' Muiriosa 19 April 2006

You touch on something very deep here, 'never daring to change'. I think this is really well written Amanda, we all experience this without doubt, in fact your title says it all - the way it is. Well done. Seán

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Peter A. Crowther 23 November 2005

Sincere and sad. I think it is a very moving and good poem. Well done.

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Charles Chaim Wax 17 November 2005

forever the necessity of love one moment after the other seeking always seeking and don't you know eventually the heart find what it must a lovely poem

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Amanda Lukas

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Ft. Lauderdale, FL
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