Friday, July 20, 2012

The Waving Comments

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I'm here, you are there,
a vessel waving in our veins,
the hours that count my significant
life, the constant image of thee,
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Elena Toledo
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Charles Jagongo Ogola 25 July 2012

This is beatiful. I got moved.

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Saadat Tahir 21 July 2012

Wretchedness i have read before...the pain of split and separation...the anguish of loneliness...but you have done it remarkably well great lines…beautiful on poetic merit enjoyed reading your superb poem cheers :)

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