Monday, May 5, 2008

** *** ***the Waves Whisper.... Comments

Rating: 3.0

Lets go sailing, on a sea of dreams,
captivate all the senses...completely.
Complete the dream, the waves whisper.
Finish the rowing into shore...or sink
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Shelley L Baxter
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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 May 2008

waves when whisper the quest tide seems to be still by the stride sailing by the sea yet remains in dream fear is never relished by the strife sorrows when guard the ship God when favours the fortune by the prayer the nightmare when compressed in its dark room man descends by the peace with awe of tomorrow vision still croons at thresh hold to the new door...........................lovely poem of life when wrought my the imagery of dream, really inspiring, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Ian Bowen 05 May 2008

Shelley, very enjoyable piece of writing. Ian

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Shelley L Baxter

Shelley L Baxter

Calgary, Canada.
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