Coldness, silence, and stillness
Once broken is turned in a wave,
One existed but unaware of himself,
Cold, silent, still! A sage in a cave!
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Beautiful....! ! A new song has been sung.... A new love unfolds.... ripples of joy spreads and Heaven rejoices!
Beautiful! Your each poem is a gem, a shine and a luster. Akhtarji this poems brightens not only my day it brightens the poetry world.
Your style, intelligence and wit always make your poetry immensely enjoyable for me to read!
Philosophic, scientific and poetic...................................................A wonderful poem!
Brilliant poem on waves, very well written I agree with you that they do not come on their own it emerges from the most silent things. These waves are source of inspiration to everyone on this earth, a very inspiring poem Janab...10++++
Beautiful waves singing musical notes. The music will go on While waves will ebb and rise though the old actors are gone play will go on with the new spectators on. Beautiful write. I loved reading each lines.