Tuesday, July 26, 2016

The Waves Comments

Rating: 5.0

Coldness, silence, and stillness
Once broken is turned in a wave,
One existed but unaware of himself,
Cold, silent, still! A sage in a cave!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Geetha Jayakumar 01 August 2016

Beautiful waves singing musical notes. The music will go on While waves will ebb and rise though the old actors are gone play will go on with the new spectators on. Beautiful write. I loved reading each lines.

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Valsa George 27 July 2016

Beautiful....! ! A new song has been sung.... A new love unfolds.... ripples of joy spreads and Heaven rejoices!

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Savita Tyagi 27 July 2016

Beautiful! Your each poem is a gem, a shine and a luster. Akhtarji this poems brightens not only my day it brightens the poetry world.

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Kelly Kurt 27 July 2016

Your style, intelligence and wit always make your poetry immensely enjoyable for me to read!

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Khalid Saifullah 26 July 2016

Philosophic, scientific and poetic...................................................A wonderful poem!

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M Asim Nehal 26 July 2016

Brilliant poem on waves, very well written I agree with you that they do not come on their own it emerges from the most silent things. These waves are source of inspiration to everyone on this earth, a very inspiring poem Janab...10++++

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