One final look at your reflection
An image blurred, what can you see?
A ripple barely breaks the surface
Your life a stone cast to the stream
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I'm very glad to hear you can find something in it to relate to! THAT means the most to me. I really appreciate all of the feedback Ginger!
wow your poems just touch me. Stand before a raging river, Try to see where it begins, Then take a look a little closer, You just might see where you fit in. that means alot about me. keep up the great writing
It means a lot to know others are taking the time to read my writing, and more so that you're all letting me know your opinions! Thank you!
Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm new to releasing my poetry work, but your comment is very motivating.
A very meaningful and thought-provoking poem Tyler. Very good and well written.
Thank you very much!