Tuesday, February 27, 2018

The Waterfall Comments

Rating: 4.0

Slowly like a defeated foe do
you oh water walk majestically
over the bedrock from a source
upstate emitting shrilling sounds
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Chinonso Igwe
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Douglas Scotney 27 February 2018

a bit harsh on the maid aren't you Chinonso?

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CHINONSO IGWE 28 February 2018

from the part of society i came from, the maid are mostly treated like slaves and ordinary servants with no prestige.i had to exploit this very fact in the poem to fully experience the extent of what am saying.thanks for the contribution.scotney

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CHINONSO IGWE 27 February 2018

feel free to add your critiques and also rate the poem

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